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Day 7
Kingfisher, Oklahoma is not such a great place to be today.
For some reason I wanted to revisit the Ailchas chapter involving the fight. Make it more gritty. Less elegant. I am expecting to find it a wee be choreographed. While Ailchas is a trained Swordsinger, he’s also a practical man. Going for the knockdown, knockout, or kill as soon as possible. Let’s see what we can do to get it that way.