Yesterday’s review felt a little like cheating. I haven’t established any rules about what content makes it into these little sessions. To be sure that review was significantly more meaty than all of the first week of effort.
It feels unfair because it is meta-writing–even if it’s original for me. I wont be cutting those out entirely. I recognize that one of the things I do poorly is review things. My reviews need to get better because I like to review things. Can’t get better without trying.
But they’ll be fewer in number than the creative pieces.
Let me be creative…
I was thinking that I would do a second description of the ah’Taconschientee. Maybe I’ll do several.
Gane stood back from the clearcrete wall and the nerve-vibrating edge of oblivion. He was on deck for the next slide over to the ah’Taconschienteen spike. He had purposefully fasted since early the day before yesterday. His hunger drown out any nausea and focused his attention enough to stave off the worst of his vertigo. Chabe, a long dead technomonk, taught him that particular hres within a month of Gane taking vows. Gane had never been to ah’Taconschientee well fed.
His proper title was Solexcorp Technician – Prim. But the Tacons, and everyone else, just called him “The Solex Guy”.