Comments on: Unpromtped

By: palisade14

palisade14 — Wed, 23 Jul 2008 21:24:34 +0000

Yep. I just mean to point out to me mostly that learning to write better isn't just about putting the Beginning before the Middle and the End after the Middle.

Sometimes it's the nuts and bolts of language that need learnin'

By: Fred

Fred — Wed, 23 Jul 2008 20:02:19 +0000

Hey, you know I am just scuffing your fruit. I am still in awe that you took on this project. I am just helping you keep it real.

By: palisade14

palisade14 — Tue, 22 Jul 2008 03:49:48 +0000

@fred I like thinking constructively too. However, you're falling into the same trap I do everyday. Writing about not writing is still writing. Even when I not-write write I still pause to punch up the verbs. I still think may way around my passive voice. I still double check my commas.

It's not interesting content, but I try to make it correctly not interesting.

Let's see how this week goes. And thanks. It's nice to know there are folks out there taking the time to read this at all.

By: Fred

Fred — Mon, 21 Jul 2008 23:01:10 +0000

Good luck.

I like this post. It is writing about what you will be writing instead of writing about why you didn't write. It is looking ahead instead of looking back. A whole new perspective.