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Barely Two More Paragraphs on Xinshi
Today I’m going to do something I’ve implied I would do but haven’t yet. I employ a ‘come back’ tag to indicate work I feel deserves to be revisited at a later date. In most cases I have not come back to it. Let’s see what we can find in there…
There was better stuff in there to choose from than I expected.
This originated from a picture I can no longer find. I’m tempted to go look for it now but I won’t since I’ve already messed around enough this morning.
The thirteen red feathers of the [maestro’s][clothing] stirred by his movement continued to undulate like motes in the lightly milling air between them.
Xinshi never answered [maestro] but he never broke eye-contact with [maestro] either. Each time the [maestro] rose to anger with Xinshi I felt included with the pair. Maybe the feeling grew from being at the [maestro’s] side day up and day down. I never missed an encounter. Eventually the old man acquiesced.
Day 288