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Edit: The Third Conner’s Son
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Conner’s Son hadn’t destroyed them.
Conner toted the injured boy upstream to the spring’s source. He laid him down carefully by way of apology for his early outburst, but Conner’s Son didn’t notice.
“Right one, yes?” Conner asked.
Conner’s Son grunted his assent. The change of position from being carried to being prone renewed Conner’s Son’s nausea.
“I’ll go first. The first part we have to lay down and scuffle through the mud. After a bit—two body length’s maybe—I can turn around and help, but you’ll need to lie on your left side, bad foot on top, kicking till I can get back to you to pull. Near the end you want to be on your back.”
Conner’s Son stammered through the remaining nausea to say, “Cover…me…up.”
“Too late. We can only hope [the beast by name] won’t be able to get in. Don’t wait for me to disappear. You need to be right behind me.” Conner captured Conner’s Son’s eyes with his own. “Right behind.”
Conner ducked into the spring-cave and began to crawl. The narrow space made him frantic at first, but as the cold water soaked into his shirt and pants it cooled his fear. He struggled through four narrowings and a leftward bend. Sometimes pushing, sometimes kicking, sometimes wriggling with his whole body. The pattern of movement brought to mind the first—and only—time he’d explored the cave. Hopefully nothing new blocked their way.
There was no way for Conner to know if Conner’s Son followed or not. All he could do was race to the chamber, turn his body around, angle back hands first, and hope.