Archive for the ‘dialogue’ tag
Relative to the Book Gate
Read here first. Here second. Here third.
Now here…
:?list available shops, sort by proximity, with directions relative to the Book Gate:
:.danforth Road Photography (0.26 miles, 11.5°)
:,[something that sounds like a mini-mall] (0.84 miles, 85.5°)
:,bonar Balfour: Haberdasher & Milliner (2.67 miles, 127.3°):
:?haberdasher: I’m trying to imagine a shop that sells clothing, woman’s hats, and photography supplies. As well as decide if I want to go that far out of my way.
:.public inventory includes stock films and custom cutting services:
:?stocking man’s hats:, I could really use a new hat.
:.affirmative:
:.map it; call in the quickest order to fill; shut-down:
I stop listening before the camera acknowledges my requests. I need to think.
Word count: 113
Day 246
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Her Dry Tin Fingers
Read this first if you haven’t already.
“He will not be easily found that one. Speak his name to these and they will aid you.”
Grandma’s words felt like a memory or a dream compared to the unexpected firmness of her grip. She gave me other instructions I think—maybe something about employing them before they became brittle and maybe something about speaking to the redder ones first. I know for certain, because I can still feel the matte texture of her dry tin fingers, I no longer underestimate her power.
I packed the leaves into an empty film packet from my vest. Grandma picked up my camera bag and offered it to me with the flap folded back. I placed the packet into an unoccupied slot and buttoned the flap down and told the camera not to peek into the packet.
“Thank you, Nonni. I’ll remember you to him when we meet.”
“Don’t.”
“It’s no bother. I won’t forget like I used to when I was a kid.”
“Don’t. I don’t want your brother to think on me at all.”
She may have sat down at the bench. She may have walked into the woods. She may have vanished in a puff. I got on my way and she on hers and I never told my brother.
Word count: 215
Day 244
Bringer
- Practiced and Without Fail
- Her Dry Tin Fingers (now reading)
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Cutting My Comics Teeth
Below is my effort to mimic a comic book. I’ve not written this but paraphrased from an actual comic book. I’m looking to reproduce the feel in my head not to pass this off as my own work.
The motivation for this piece is about ten years of reading comics and the newest version of Celtx. They added a comic book template.
Page 1
Panel 1 Outside a high-rise club in downtown Tokyo
SIDEKICK
Think she’ll bite?
Panel 2 Inside same club; well dressed patrons of all cultures
dance in the background; Sidekick and HERO sit at a
table for two in the fore.
HERO
There are only two ways for this to go. We’ll know
soon enough.
SIDEKICK
Whatever. I’m just killing time here.
Panel 3 Our hero is displeased.
HERO
I didn’t ask you here and I don’t need you.
Page 2
Panel 1 Our Sidekick is undaunted; bubbly in fact.
SIDEKICK
And miss this banter? Clearly you’re a powerhouse
in this scene. How’d you solo this far up the
ladder?
Panel 2 Reverse on our convo from the dance floor
HERO
How do you know I soloed this far?
SIDEKICK
Not sure. You’ve got a loner vibe. As for me it
was time I got my game on. No one else looking out
for Sidekick.
Panel 3 On our hero again
HERO
This scene stands for more than your selfishness,
Sidekick.
Panel 4 Over our hero’s shoulder on angry Sidekick.
SIDEKICK
Pft! Climb down from your castle some time to see
how the rest of us live. We’re scrounging for
position down here and it not getting better, it’s
getting worse. I’m not getting screwed over!
HERO
This scene is about defending the people. It’s
been that way along time. Time erodes our
culture…
Panel 5 Hero’s eyes
HERO
…unless we remember what it stands for.
Word count: 260
Day 242
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