Tag Archives: malachi
Thirteen More Scenes Go Off Their Diet
Malachi simply cannot get out of prison without police hunting him down afterward. This may be the hardest part of what I have to do. Not making their involvement to flat or too round.
Nine of Yesterday’s Scenes Get Into the Purple Box of Samoas
Sticking with my two day trend I’m going to put yesterday’s list of scenes on a all Girl Scout cookie diet to fatten them up . At least some of them.
Malachi breaking out of jail – Really, the only dramatic way to get out of prison when you need out is to escape. [...]
Twenty-eight Scenes
Part of my trouble is that I never meant for this to be a prison break situation and now it is. I like that. I'm just not certain how to write it up with much credibility.
A Logline for Malachi
I could find no plausible way to indicate he's an ex-con either. Maybe he's not an ex. Maybe he's in prison? He needs to escape prison and rescue his mentor from the dragon. Fuck. That's better.
Clean-cut Mal
That choreography reduced the gap between his wrists and the cuffs of the borrowed jacket but it made him like as if he had a stick up his ass.
A Wiser Authorial Voice