Tag Archives: mech

See Spot Run

Explaining and setting up the motivations of the antagonist bloated the plot. Mostly, I think, because I wanted to be classier than, "Hey Reader! Here's a bone. Go get it Boy."
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Armburster: Light Plotting

I don't want accidental or coerced badness. I want dead-on purposeful seeking your death or destruction badness.
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Fanning the Embers

Moore contributed most of the logic used to determine the likely ranking of encountered aboriginals—who to shoot first and who to ask questions of afterward.
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Low-level Smoke

Bio meta faded in. These I could use. These meta describe the character of the encountered aboriginals. This encounter was supposed to be cake but I now knew it wouldn't be.
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An Unanticipated Krunk

Aubrelia smiled at her each time, but more than once patted her weapon and then pointed Jekkasantyle’s attention back to her perch on the mini-gun.
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Robots Give Me Pause

I think you’d need to treat the mech as a character of sorts or maybe like a pet. Give it coincidental dialogue or make it an aspect of a character’s personality the same way you might a horse or dog.
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