Tritti flicked the line up of tellat seeds off the rail of Johnka’s sledge. A solo version of a game she played with her brother. She was supposed to care how far they flew, but each seed dropped over the edge and out of sight like the previous one. Maybe the really [...]
Thickening the plot remains elusive to me. After I practice writing I must learn to practice thickening. Even a runny plot would be better than what I regularly mix up.
If you take the time to read any of what I have written–here or elsewhere–you would likely discover that I dabble in images. The very brief [...]
The cockpit/bridge [need a better term and consistency here] of Johnka’s floating sledge underslings the prow. The driver [captain] enjoys most of the day in the sun. For early morning and late afternoon sun the driver flies bright canopies. Some models are equipped with a heliotracking curtain that does the work for the driver. During [...]
Today I’ll be digging up Tritti and Johnka from the pilgrim and Shanty thread. After a sort.
Johnka’s wagon is typical of any on the thinly disguised desert sands of [somewhere]. But it’s of the largest sort. It’s size isn’t what you notice first. The low featured desert dune magnify and reduce objects in a random [...]