Improbably Effective Pantomime

As I mentioned more than a week ago I’d be taking a week off.  Or at least I alluded to to it.  Or maybe that was in my head.  Regardless, it’s my reality to make up and yours to shrug your shoulders at and accept. This welcome me back post won’t be of the creative bent nor of the housekeeping ilk either.  Hopefully it’s observational.

This past week I spent two hours each morning delivering technical training to a mixed group of Europeans:  Germans, Czechs, French, and a Fin or Swede–what do I know.  Nearly every aspect of the training challenged me in new ways.  I’d like to focus a few words on two of the ones I was unable to control.  The first one I anticipated.

I don’t have an ear for European accents.  Commonly the students needed to repeat my name before I recognized the sounds as a request.  In my defense, neither ‘doog’ or ‘doogles’ are my names, but you’d have thought them close enough.  Tied with these unfamiliar sounds, they typically pronounced my name faster than I normally hear it.  An effect like you might produce when entering into a longer word and that first syllable gets abbreviated in the rush.  So that was fun.

I don’t know if the next thing was cultural or class specific.  It certainly was pronounced.  They never ask questions.  My favorite teaching technique–or trick–is to ask a question and follow it with an uncomfortable amount of silence.  A student will snap and give you an answer just to fill the silence.  It’s a little easier to pull off in person since a phone call already puts a person in a tuned out state, but I’ve normally heard it work on a call too.  Not these guys.  No desire to fill the silence just to make it go away.

As an instructor these two behaviors–accents and silence resistance–cause me a number of problems.  As a writer they pique my curiosity.

Commonly in fantasy you will run across new and made-up cultures.  Those cultures then run across newer and made-upper cultures.  If there is a language challenge it’s typically overcome with a Common Tongue, a convenient bilingual, or improbably effective pantomime.  But what if those meeting worked more like they really do.  A Spanish speaking elf runs into an English speaking gnome.  The elf knows exactly where the treasure is the gnome seeks–could avoid the dragon and lead him right to the gold and the story would be over.  Instead the two meet on the road communicate enough to share a roasted rabbit for dinner and then due to their language differences go their separate ways.  (I can’t tell you how often I’ve shared a rabbit with a Spanish speaker on my way to getting my gold.)

Differences between cultures will lead some to be curious and others defensive.  I think at some point being either one of those becomes tiring.  Eventually you have to expend more effort than the reward is worth.  A fewer charaters will push through that barrier and accend to the next level, but most won’t.  I think you could build a great deal of tension in a plot using language differences.

I’ll not spend the time to drag us through my thoughts on not answering questions since it’s time to make some money, but suffice to say I had similar wonderings.  There always seems to be a ’roundtable’ meeting in epic fantasy.  What if the tension wasn’t political but merely practical: “What the hell did he just say?”

(Day 269 was hardcopy I wrote yesterday I won’t transcribe here.)

Day 270

Not the Honga Followup I Planned

Let’s see if I can string together a plot of some kind here.  I’ll run down the TOC for the “20 Master Plots and how to build them” book I bought a ways back.  Also I’ll resist the urge to create a spreadsheet outlining the TOC and making use of cells to collect the core tips for each master plot.  I’ll try not to think about how easy it would be to then create a template that I could use over and over to crank out simple plottings like this.  Tamping down natural instinct to avoid writing.

Quest
Tyh discovers a map while cleaning the Quartermaster’s shop.  He convinces Keena and Bem to aid him in traveling to the X to find the McGuffin.

Adventure

Bleh

Pursuit

See Quest above.  Their suspicious departure with a honga angers the guild.  The three not only race to find the McGuffin but out run their pursuers.  Finding the McGuffin in time will appease all parties.

Rescue
The moment Keena thrusts Tyh toward the Quartermaster is the last time anyone sees her.  Because she has enemies no one is surprised but only Tyh seems to want to do anything about it.  He must find out where she’s been taken and by whom to stabilize some world shattering turmoil I’ll have to figure out later.

Escape

Captured by Keena and indentured with the Quartermaster, Tyh wants nothing to do with these filthy honga drivers.  He must master his fear of the beasts and find a way out if he is to get back to his village and marry the girl of his dreams before she [has something plausibly bad happen to her].

Revenge
Meh

The Riddle
You mean like WTF?

Rivalry

Tyh’s position in the Quartermaster’s shop puts him in touch with every honga rider and pilot in the den.  He unwittingly gains experience and connections Keena craves.  It’s not until he is sworn as a honga-rider that her jealousy peaks and he must find a way to reconcile or make an enemy of her for all time.

Underdog
Unable to get even the simplest chores completed to the Quartermaster’s satisfaction Tyh is passed from one department to the next.  It’s not until he accidentally bonds with a young honga that anyone really takes notice of him.  To prove his worthiness he competes in the honga [races|games|gymkhana|superbowl] and narrowly wins (in the last quarter).

Calling it a night.  Maybe I’ll brainstorm the other nine tomorrow.

Day 268

The First Thing You Notice is the Honga

Crap-a-doo-dah and fleh!

I couldn’t decide which one to lead with this morning so I went with both.  I know I wrote Monday but that was a bit of a cheat if you ask me—no I don’t know what the ‘rules’ are ether.  I missed last Friday for some reason and the skipped yesterday due to a bout with bad timing and then there’s the weekends that I’ve just given up on entirely, so I haven’t written in a week.  If I don’t get something in today next week’s schedule is going to make it a fortnight.

Inspired by this, this, and this.

Let’s see whats in the bag…

Tyh gaped.

The honga stared.  The honga drooled.  The honga blocked the sun.

Tyh was being jerked to his feet and he was being pulled around the honga—apparantly three things existed.  Tyh struggled to believe that even he could fit into the same world as this sky-darkening monstrosity but looking away broke the lock.

Keena tugged him toward a half-door mounted along the wall of the honga-pit.  A slight man in pilots’ gear leaned in the jam outside the office with one hand on the half-door’s shelf.  Another man, inside the office, held his head raised above his crossed arms on the same shelf.  Each watched Tyh’s nearly involuntary approach.

“Quartermaster.  I’m bringing you some help,” Keena declared.  The Quartermaster slumped his face into his arms.  His pendant earrings jangled onto the shelf.

“Keena,” said the man dressed as a pilot.

“Keena,” mumbled the Quartermaster.

“Quartermaster did you hear me?  I’m bringing you a helper.  Someone to sweep your office.  Someone to clean your window.  Someone to collect your papers.”

The Quartermaster left his head on his arms.  “I know what help is Keena and I do not need it.”  The last four words he spoke increased in anger and volume.  His bald head flushed with blood and his gold scalp ring went from limp to perpendicular as his jaws clenched the skin over his skull taut, but his face never left its hiding spot.

“Of course you do.”  Keena slung Tyh toward the door and headed off into the back of the pit.

“Dammit, Keena!”  The Quartermaster pulled the half-door open so quickly Tyh felt the rush of air.  The Quartermaster chased her for three enraged steps and then just stopped.  The man dressed as a pilot blandly watched Tyh throughout.

“You see!  You see?  You see what she does to me.  Don’t you?”  The Quartermaster didn’t have to turn slightly to the man dressed as a pilot for Tyh to know he wasn’t being addressed.  Tyh decided it would be easier to speak to the Quartermaster’s back than to wait for him to turn around and show his face.

“I’m Tyh.”

“I don’t care.”

The man dressed as a pilot chuckled, “I’m Bem.”

Day 267