After Morning Coffee at The Galley Cat Grill

Ugh. Must write something prosey.

Upward Charma heard the bay of Melon’s Flitworks creak even before she heard the nautical chime of the Pit’s wakebell sound. The two sounds were close together so she steadied for a substantial surge.

“Ma’am, grab hold.” Charma pointed her only shopper of the morning to one of the stanchions that held her stall’s green canopy aloft. “Quick.”

Charma scanned the Pit to see that her fellow stallmates around the Pit were directing the few early morning patrons likewise. Unsurprisingly the crunkle of the aluminum deck began at the north corner and waved rapidly underfoot till it concluded with a watery slap at the Pit’s south corner.

“Oh, my! What was that? I thought we were safe out here,” the touri said.

“We’re safe, ma’am. Nothing to worry about there. But the Pit,” Charma flicked her finger from north to south across the Pit, “The Pit isn’t moored like the rest of Benhá. We’re only tied on. It’s how you get these great prices.”

“Ahhh,” the woman responded but Charma could see she didn’t understand.

“Like a boat.”

“Ohhh, now I see. So that was a wake?”

“Yes. A pretty big one too. Look over here.” Charma guestured around to the southeast where you could see out into the river’s upper delta past The Galley Cat Grillery. “Should be a cruise ship coming by in a moment or two.”

Indeed in a moment or two a cruiseship’s triangular prow slid into view. It was so close that it nearly seemed to exit The Galley Cat after coffee with friends.

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The Post Killing Bath

I thought I might clean up yesterday’s work but I’ve decided to move forward instead. Knowing my enthusiasm for writing about sublimating snow, I doubt I’ll forget to add that bit in when I finally do get back to that scene. I’m halfway afraid of locking in a sensibility to that scene that I wouldn’t return to later and would do well at the moment.

“I have a theory,” Jessica said.

“You have a theory? You have a theory? I have a th…” Jessica splashed water on Prince Carta.

“I’ve just slain a dragon and I’d like to be the only one talking. You can shit on me later.” Jessica Matthews pushed back from the edge of the bath because the stone wall cooled the water too well and she wanted to be surrounded by warmth. She suspected that even though Carta would continue staring out to the sparkling white mountains that hearing her swim to the center of the bath would put a woman’s body to mind—she wondered whose. “What was her name?”

“What? Whose name? What do you mean? Who?”

Jessica didn’t really want to tease Carta right now, but she also doubted she’d ever get the chance again. She sighed. “What was the dragon’s name? That wasn’t ulubenu’unedulu.” She watched his frame relax.

“No. No, that wasn’t Ulubenu’unedulu. It was probably Opuondo or Millowollim maybe. She was a cousin not a sister. I’ll ask Tandi for you; he should know.”

“That’s OK. I guess it doesn’t really matter. Aren’t you cold?”

Carta’s hands rose on both sides. His fingers splayed tensely then fisted then open wide again before they sagged back to his side. “I’m chilly. Dame Matthews, you said you had a theory.”

Jessica slowed her treading and let her head slip under the surface with the rest of her body. She thrust backward till her feet brushed the sandy slope of the shallows. When she came up she shook out her short red hair and cleared the water from her eyes.

“Come over here and sit on the bench by the fire. I don’t want to yell.”

Some of this is how I’d right it up, but some of it’s stalling because I’m not sure how to have the ‘theory’conversation yet.

378 words on day 693

The Dragon’s Egg

I have been writing daily. I’ve been working on my handwritten notes as well as my plotting of Gertrude and Grumphook. I want to do somethine different fro this evening, but I’m having a little trouble deciding what that should be. Some of my plotting, though required, feels too much like cheating.

“It doesn’t look like it could feed a village for month,” said Geir. “Even ours.”

“Are you sure that’s even an egg? It looks like all the other stones to me. That’s not a nest. Is that a nest?” asked Svein.

“It’s a nest,” said Geir.

“Are you sure?” Geir slapped Svein in the forehead.

“Hey!”

Per shushed them both, and Karoline glared at all three. Quitely she said, “Those are river stones. From near the end of the Glaumr [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Glomma] where it runs flat.”

“I’ve never seen stones round and smooth like that,” said Svein.

“Have you been to the end of the Glaumr, Svein?” Before the younger boy could answer she added, “Something.”

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