Still in the Bowels

“Why didn’t you mention that earlier?” Kera skipped to a backward jog further down the corridor expecting Donna to match pace at least some. The MPM pushed her face to a flat grin, pointed to a glyph on the ground then at the featureless wall with her clipboard, and stepped into it’s surface.

“Right.”

Kera hopped back to the spot Donna vacated. She stepped into the featureless wall banging her nose on the masonry block just a little before getting her hands up. Kera used doors like this every day, so finding one she couldn’t get through surprised her.

Presuming the door was older than the ones she used in the newer building G, she tried a more emphatic approach. She placed her foot on the glyph and her hand on the wall. When she pushed she felt the door there this time. It felt found but locked. She tried again, still locked. Donna would have to come back out and get her.

119 words on day 580

Into the Bowels of Crainstock Ltd

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Kera had never imbued an [engine ring] before.

“How many is your most?” the hurried MPM asked. She swung open the next door and held it for Kera while encouraging her to walk faster with the clipboard her other hand.

“Nine of us blessed a sword with accuracy and ever-sharp in school,” Kera said.

“OK. This’ll be three times that.” The door shut behind Kera like a prison gate.

Kera frowned to the MPM despite her excitement.

“It’s a much bigger ring than our usual.”

“Oh,” Kera said. “Dana, right?”

“Donna.” Anything else the Magical Project Manager might have said was lost in her attention to the contents of the folder attached to her clipboard.

“Donna, what happened?” Kera didn’t need the late night rush down unfamiliar hallways to tell her something had gone wrong if she were being snagged off her own project to imbue a ring with twenty-six—twenty-six!—other other mages. If she’d applied for one of the infrequent junior mage roles, did two layers of interviews, waited 90 days, and then was accepted to imbue a standard [engine ring] she’d have been astonished.

“That son-of-a-bitch Ajit…sorry, Mr. Balasubramanyan…threw up all over my…the, the [engine ring] during tuning. I guess he’d gotten the flu or something but didn’t want to recuse himself.” Donna stopped short. “You’re not sick are you?”

Kera considered the question, even pushing her thoughts out to her extremities like a mental MRI feeling for everything from sniffles to cancer. All she found was excitement.

“Maybe I ought to be?” Kera joked.

The MPM whispered as if she gripped Kera by the collar and jerked her face to face. “Don’t fuck with me. Is there any reason—any at all—you can’t do this?”

“None.” Kera swallowed as silently as possible. “Did you say during the tuning?”

“Kera, do I seem like the kind of person who enjoys walking fast?”

“Why didn’t you mention that earlier?” Kera skipped to a backward jog further down the corridor expecting Donna to match pace at least some. The MPM pushed her face to a flat grin, pointed at the featureless wall with her clipboard, and stepped into it’s surface.

367 words on day 579

The Evil Coach

Sunday I had an idea that didn’t fully form. Yesterday I had the same thought in earnest so it did. I expected to even act on it, but I didn’t. What if I wrote some in the morning then picked the thread back up in the evening? Nearly 600 posts in and I’m a genius suddenly.

At least one other thing occurred to me regarding my Fake Christian Jock character. His story spreads out over many years of his life in order to see not only the desperate and touching—of course—conversion, but also the original fall from grace. There needs to be a scene where he does something publicly egregious then employs his false Christianity to beg forgiveness and gets it. The same sort of thing bookended in the scene I noted yesterday where he is outed.

He’s got to be convinced of his ability to dupe anyone so that when the coach who gets it comes as such a shock. Was he clumsy about hiding his lie? Was he just that easy to read?

I intuit this coach will be the turning point for FCJ, but I don’t see how to make that concrete yet. Perhaps exploring this Evil Coach’s agenda will help me out…

First, he doesn’t have an agenda and he’s not evil. He’s just trying to get by in the collegiate world like the rest of them. He’s hoping to get a head coaching position at the university level or maybe a side bump into the NFL as a trainer then up through the ranks. He’s young but older than FCJ; he has a small family. Even his recognition of what FCJ is up to isn’t evil. Maybe he even sees it as a nice bit of strategy. Like branding and name recognition.

The Evil Coach character will have difficultly spanning the life of the FCJ though. That specific protagonist appearing in the right places in all three acts will be difficult to pull off. Which leaves me wondering if EC should catalyze FCJ’s recognition of the problem instead. Huh? I don’t like the possibility of employing a symbolic force like ‘almost getting caught’ to crop up from time to time to plague my FCJ. Seems like a cop out.

373 words on day 578